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Post by Tatsu on Feb 9, 2010 23:31:14 GMT -5
Hello, if you would like to comment on my Story for Tatsu, please put them here! You can reply weekly with the new chapters and so on. Thanks, TatsuX
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Neki
EcoGrid Master
Just a Doll in a Belfry
Posts: 683
RP Characters: Mykah Mikelle, Shinrah Marr, Lyr Ballamy
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Post by Neki on Feb 10, 2010 7:55:09 GMT -5
I really like your story! Dont worry about it being short, my first chapter for Shinrah was very short.
I really like the description you have in your writing. Its great! Please, write more!
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Post by Tatsu on Feb 10, 2010 12:09:28 GMT -5
Thank you so much! Yup the next/ following chapters I am debating whether or not to make it first person or third.
What do you think I should do?
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Post by Altairas on Feb 11, 2010 8:14:11 GMT -5
Third helps more with details and such so third I guess. Love the story, >.< Can't wait to hear more.
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Post by Tatsu on Feb 11, 2010 11:15:29 GMT -5
Awesome thanks Evey ^^. Well Right now I am in the middle of Chapter 2. So hopefully saturday I will have it up.
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Post by Altairas on Feb 11, 2010 16:40:32 GMT -5
Can't wait -nibbles fingernails-
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Neki
EcoGrid Master
Just a Doll in a Belfry
Posts: 683
RP Characters: Mykah Mikelle, Shinrah Marr, Lyr Ballamy
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Post by Neki on Feb 12, 2010 8:44:56 GMT -5
OOH, I cant wait. I am so excited. I really like Tatsu. He's cool!
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Post by Tatsu on Feb 12, 2010 13:05:41 GMT -5
Thanks guys ^^. I am almost done witht he chapter, so deffinetly it should be up tomarrow.
I have now made it to where every Saturday a New chapter will be up.
Thanks! I tried very hard to make him abnormal. XD
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Post by Tatsu on Apr 5, 2010 1:35:32 GMT -5
BAD NEWS! I wrote like 10 chapters while I was gone, I was gone cuz of grades anywho. ALL MY FILES ON MY COMPUTER WERE DELETED!
Two years of hard work gone in just a second! Now I own a laptop which I must rewrite what I wrote! So be expecting it within two weeks guys!
I am SO sorry, I was furious! I cried for like 3 hours... thats how much data was lost, not to mention about all my school work!
So be looking for the new chapters!
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imelza0
Metal Kor
[M:-900]
Stegosaurus
Posts: 116
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Post by imelza0 on Apr 5, 2010 21:02:31 GMT -5
The thought of you crying made me laugh a little, I'll have to say. Not to be mean, but pretty much any guy crying is a little awkward. You sound a lot like a friend of mine. I hope you get the files either back, or can remember what you wrote! And owning a laptop is the bast thing ever ^^
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