Neki
EcoGrid Master
Just a Doll in a Belfry
Posts: 683
RP Characters: Mykah Mikelle, Shinrah Marr, Lyr Ballamy
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Post by Neki on Dec 7, 2009 13:12:53 GMT -5
Neko here. I love poetry, and I love sharing it, so I will post a lot of my poetry here. Theres no sense in making a thread for all my different poems, so I'll just post them together.  Fallen DreamsI saw how this flew past my eyes But it was all just a lie Now falling down in silver rain Lies that were my fantasy My own world I wondered how They could have fallen so low Fallen so far From my oen eyes From my own dreams But they are mine My fallen dreams All cascading down In a silvery rain Oh hopes and fears Of lies and sins And now I wonder How did I manage To ever put them back together All lying there cracked and broken The Fallen dreams Of my Life. Review Please!!!!!! I will add more onto here, but this is the only poem I had with me at the moment. |
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Post by dbkillerex on Dec 16, 2009 6:57:30 GMT -5
I actually liked that poem. I am a poem writer myself  , every day i make a new poem...... but ill never wanna show them, a poem is very personal you see?, it has a special meaning only the writer knows.
Ill tell you a tip i got form a someone who does it as her job. First you write everything down, don't think of how it will sound or play like, or if it will rhyme. Just write it all down, after that you could easily Fraze it into a good song. (Don't forget to cut the first page into many pieces once your done, its for your eyes only XD)
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Neki
EcoGrid Master
Just a Doll in a Belfry
Posts: 683
RP Characters: Mykah Mikelle, Shinrah Marr, Lyr Ballamy
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Post by Neki on Dec 16, 2009 8:50:29 GMT -5
Lol. I know not everyone will like my poems, but thats okay. I have a very distinct style of writing that has absolutely no distinction at all.
Fallen Leaves
In a crooked little town
They were lost and never found
Fallen leaves upon the ground
Fallen leaves upon the ground
Run away before you drwon
For the streets will surely beat you donwn
Fallen leaves upon the ground
Fallen leaves upon the ground
Faraway you are bound
To haunt the land with your wjispering sound
Oh my fallen leaves upon the ground
Yes my fallen leaves upon the ground
Next poem! I am happy. lol, I love poetry.
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Post by Altairas on Dec 28, 2009 18:16:49 GMT -5
lol i love the way you wright your poems neki! I will have to post my poems too! =)
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Neki
EcoGrid Master
Just a Doll in a Belfry
Posts: 683
RP Characters: Mykah Mikelle, Shinrah Marr, Lyr Ballamy
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Post by Neki on Jan 6, 2010 18:32:49 GMT -5
Seeing Redd
The world is gray
And yet I see
The white light of the day
Shining down upon me
My world is colorless
Cold and lonely
Despairing and Restless
I set out to find thee
Colors have all run away
To a place of bright cheer
But I have found one color with to play
One color that does not sneer
It comes in the form of a butterfly
A single red speck in the gray
It is hope, I will not lie
That maybe we will have color again someday
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Neki
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Just a Doll in a Belfry
Posts: 683
RP Characters: Mykah Mikelle, Shinrah Marr, Lyr Ballamy
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Post by Neki on Jan 6, 2010 18:34:20 GMT -5
Seasons Melody
The wind blows softly
Over the land
A haunting tune
A seasonal melody
It dances with the leaves
To a slow beat
Gradually growing faster
and Faster
It spins them on a nverending path
Across the world
Those fallen leaves
Dance away
To a place beyond your wildest dreams
Where wild things roam
and dreams never die
Where hope eternally lives
They rustle on and on
and on a while longer
To the next season
Blows them away
The song is shrill now
A chill wind biting
A cold wind blowing
The leaves away
It is snowing, cold
The days are gray and sunless
A sad melody plays
A seasonal melody
Of cold snowflakes, never the same
Roaming the earth
On cold winds
Carrying them away
Thier crytalling forms rides
The long winter nights
And the short days
Wating fot the days to be warm once more
And so they are
As the snow melts
Songbirds sing
Adding to the melody
The Melody of season
That everchanging melody
A music so moving
That it can only be that
Of the seasons.
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Neki
EcoGrid Master
Just a Doll in a Belfry
Posts: 683
RP Characters: Mykah Mikelle, Shinrah Marr, Lyr Ballamy
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Post by Neki on Jan 6, 2010 18:36:33 GMT -5
Winter Hearts
I look into the Mirror
The Green Eyes staring back
Thier black centers
Ringed with Gold
I look deeeper, into the heart
Rimmed with frost
Cold and lonely
A winter heart
A soul lost
In a darkness
Without sun, without glow
Without the Winter Light
Deeper, Deeper
Past all life, into the past
To a land where dreams grow
Without the killing Winter frost
The dreams are bright
A restful place away from life
But the soul wakes to morning light
A cold day of White
A cold heart scarred over by strife
A Winter Heart
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Neki
EcoGrid Master
Just a Doll in a Belfry
Posts: 683
RP Characters: Mykah Mikelle, Shinrah Marr, Lyr Ballamy
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Post by Neki on Jan 6, 2010 18:38:43 GMT -5
The Fox
The Day turns to night
Red Shadow in the moonlight
Creatures hide in fright
Dragon
Sleek and lithe she flies
A shadow against the sky
Dangerous beauty
Nightmare Creature
His eyes pierce the night
His claws rake your flesh
The Nightmare from your worst dreams
Hope you like them. I love writing poetry
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Post by dbkillerex on Jan 9, 2010 7:29:32 GMT -5
I also like the redd
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Post by Altairas on Jan 9, 2010 15:41:01 GMT -5
I have to admit i like the Red one too. Keep it up ^_^
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