[W] Terrace Delinger

[jonpaul66]

era: Baron's Corruption-The Fall of Haven

age:21

sex:male

Name: Jerry Rasengan

History: Parents died when he was 2 years old, met lucille at age 13, married her at 19, and started racing as an occupation at 20

Posture: normaly he is very uninviting


eco type: blue eco

Apperance: 6 feet 8 inches tall, very lean, wears a yellow shirt with brown pants often, and weighs in at 120

personality: never really acceptes help, always acting as if he knows everything

weapons: sword, butterfly knife

Relationships: married to a beutiful woman named Lucille

[jonpaul66]

[ is that beter

[kelinna]

Please go back and do the form correctly. Here is the correct character creation sheet and add more detail in each subject not one or two sentences.

[Pyro]

Hey, you summoned up your guy pretty quick, but you can make him a lot better if you put in more details. you need to put in a bit more for his history and relationships for one. It wouldn't hurt to explain his powers a little more either.