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Post by dbkillerex on Feb 20, 2009 4:45:37 GMT -5
Here begins the story of our young hero, in a little house dancing around in excitement as she entered the room, she had eyes as blue as his, her hair was slightly swinging around with the wing as she closed the door, she never let him see how hard she was working, always happy, aways there for him.
"Mom!", he sayed looking up at her eyes
"Yes dear?" She replied smiling and picked him up
"Why doesn't dad ever come home early?" He asked
"Your father is a little busy but in time everything will work out" she held him tighter and looked at him with compassion
"OK" He sayed and then peaking toward the kitchen asked "can i help you make dinner today?"
"sure" letting him slip down slowly they both entered the kitchen
Taking a big sharp knife from a long wooden drawer he chose a big red tomato and started slicing it carefully. Suddenly hearing loud knocks from the door he looked at his mother trying to figure out in what situation he got himself in to. "Don't make a sound" His mother whispered, yet seconds later a relatively big man broke the door and barged in.
shocked Kane quickly ducked and ran for cover finding a big closet, then opening the doors trying not to make a sound. hiding inside it he opened a slight gap, just enough to hear the occurring battle, screaming, yelling and then a demonic crack. His eyes started watering, his heart was beating insanely as if it was trying to escape his body feeling his world falling apart. He burst out of the closet, only to witnessed his mom coming down, hitting the floor, and the smirk upon the mans face holding a metal bar. With a loud high pitched scream he stormed the man, holding the knife pointed forward.
The man was not fast enough, his efforts were useless, by the time he noticed Kane was right beside him, all he could spot was the blue light from Kane's legs. The tip of the blade entered smoothly into the mans stomach, Kane then smashed into him trying to throw him off balance making them both fall down. he saw the last flash in the mans eyes as the fall caused the knife to sink even deeper. Lying still DB has yet to understand all that happened, which was a feeling that only grew stronger as his darkest emotions came to life feeding a power of Eco hidden until now, the dark Eco, caught by surprise as he felt the Eco run through his vanes and transforming his body. DB ran out panicked looking at his long sharp nails and distorted eye sight.
from that day he keeps this memory, thinking maybe he was able to save her, maybe he was a coward...
Will be continued... well, i wanted to write so much more but i am so tired of the writer blocks and i just wanna start RPing... sorry if its not that good and all criticisms will be excepted nicely.... i want to know what i should improve for the sequel.DB out  XP
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Post by dbkillerex on Mar 3, 2010 8:31:41 GMT -5
At the age of 6 only years old, lost his purpose of life, a stream of chaotic eco surged inside. He felts his hands cracking and transforming, a sharp pain all around when horns emerged out of his cranium and his fingered thickened and enlarged forming claws. His eye sight took a turn and noises all around became keener, It was too much. Mommy... mommy... Get up!... He cried, the bright sky became cloudy in harmony with his own feelings when he overloaded and collapsed onto the ground, his blood stained shirt torn by the rocks.
Finally waking up, winking slowly a cold breeze chilled him to the bone. His sore body was relieved as he sat up, pushing upward with his hands What now?, where now?. looking back Kane had one last hope I have to call the healing people!, they can help her. He jumped up, nearly slipping onto the gravel and stormed toward the unfamiliar streets of heaven city, the green landscape turned gray and gloomy. Mother never let me out here, what is this place?, where are the healers?.... Tall buildings and shattered windows surrounded him, making him feel small and lonely, poorly dressed beggars lay on the ground, drooling over the asphalt. It was a filthy place, a narrow street where he paused to think, the sounds were of many people talking, yelling, vehicles flying above him and the landing of another KG hellcat. He stood exposed to all harms of life, and began absorbing his surrounding, the violence and harshness his mother blocked out
As he resumed his walk there were two man breaking into one of the apartments, not paying them much attention DB continued, the horrible stench scorching his nose. A man in red armor crouched down, his rifle aimed toward the two.
"Do you know where the healing people are?" Kane clung to him with hope.
"Ugh!, get away kid, cant you see I'm doing something?!" The KG shook him off than shot one of the thieves, making him drop lifelessly onto the floor.
"But my mother, she needs help!." Kane insisted
The man stood tall, and looked down at Kane "Okay kid, where is she?"
"I..." He looked back, trapped Where is the way back? "I don't know"
"Oh... so you lost your mother" The KG turned his back, calling his partner "Say Jake, mind throwing this kid off at the orphanage when your done?"
"Sure, i have nothing better to do" Jake grabbed Kane's hands firmly and led him toward the hellcat, his metal boots making a loud noise. Opening the hellcat Jake lazily sat and awaited Kait "Common kid i ain't got all day"
Curious of this vehicle, DB stood there, he sensed the very components of this machine. And when Jake started it up the engine fired into life and Kane stepped back.
"What are you waiting for?" Jake rushed him "I'm leaving, with you or without you"
Kane climbed into the hellcat, strapping on and looking out the window. As soon as the safety belt clacked in, they flew into the air. Kane was not bothered by the ragged seats, looking at the streets from above a childly smile graced his face. But still he felt entrapped,he couldn't feel or hear the wind. But soon enough Jake woke him up from his day dream
"Off you go" The door opened and Jake escorted him toward the orphanage.
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Post by dbkillerex on Sept 30, 2010 6:43:28 GMT -5
Im taking a break from the DB saga XD. I already have 5 more RP stories planned in my head to every word and detail, but im a bit lazy to put it into writing. The romantic RP story contest gave me insperation so i wrote the following story
BTW, while writing i listened to "Sundrenched world" by "Joshu radin". You might wanna listen to it while reading :]... Or perhaps a sadder or happier song... Depends what you want to feel :3
[shadow=pink,left,400]"10PM, a cold winter, paint was peeling off the pale walls. But a sweet aroma was in the air as the distant sounds of a KG patroll car faded in and out the other-wise peach black slum illuminated by the few remaining street lights
Inside the room, soft candle lights twinkled and brought forth the sweet aroma which later escaped into the streets. on the elyptical bed the two lay, Kane scorpio held himself above her with his right arm as he slowly lowered himsel, his head slowly grew nearer to her's. Jeniffer had met him not long ago, but was caught captive by his charm, his left hand took shelter under her white T-shirt around her stomach while his crystal cold eyes pierced into her velvet pink eyes in a sort of intimate moment unspoken and without a hint she felt his strong presence and gave way to his ways. "So.... That benjamin you mentioned earlier... Tell me more about him" He whispered, the horns creeped out of his skull with caution as the emotion intencified and his eyes took a deeper cloudy shade. [/Shadow]
As she lay on the lower side of the bed, her long thin figure fit perfectly with her lush long red hair that scattered over her chest and the bed sheet. Her mouth opened to a slight gap as the memories came back all so slowly, all so painfully...
"It all started back in middle school... At the begining of the school year i placed my backpack on the front seat, and although i did not know who's backpack lay on the chair next to mine, and how it would change the world for me, I did not mind. On the first lesson he sat by me, and than i remembered. Nothing ever came easy for him, he had to work hard, every single day. He always asked questions and studied thorugh most of the breaks. He kept himself in the best physical shape possible because of his dream to become a crimson guard. He kept away from troublesome kids, making the few true friends he could and making no enemys at that. It was his great hopes and unbreakable spirit that first drew me to him, he was the hand of justice in class and had stopped nearly all fights during that year...
I grew somewhat infatuated with his always cheerfull personality and kind spirit, and at lunch he came by and sat with me. At first we were both nervous, and spoke only of homework and common grudge to unwelcoming teachers, but it soon became something more. We became best friends, i helped him with his homework and he helped me get through my life. He always knew how to put a smile on my face and it was clear that it would soon evolve to something more.
I remember the day whene he first held my hand, it was so warm and he was hesitant... Thats whene it all began:
He called me his wild rose, because of my red hair, and on my finger he put on a metalic ring, with a pink diamond on top, he baught it for me with what little money he saved and a favour from a gratefull shop owner he assisted. We both ran out of my house that day, the sun was shining, to me it was brighter than ever. The sound of distant migrating birds was sung, to me more beautifull than ever. And the smells of my garden's flowers to me was sweeter than ever before. His feet clunk onto the asphalt with such soft agile steps as I followed him toward heaven forest. He embraced me into a warm hug as we went from running to walking untill eventualy he stopped in the middle of the trail and opened his mouth.
[shadow=pink,left,300]"I love you"[/shadow] He whispered and my heart skipped a beat, because I wanted to say those words for many days now, and than I felt the words slip out of my tongue "I love you too, benny... So much"
He than turned to me and held my hips with his rugged hands. He stood still and pulled me a little further toward him. Our eye contact lasted for a little over 5 seconds before he tried coming closer, and as did I. He tilted his head to the left and I to the right before our lips met, and started softly than he leaned closer and we kisseed a second time, longer. Than he broke it, slowly he backed away before leading me further into the forest. We spent the rest of the day there, by the river bank. I pushed him to the water, and he laughed..." Jeniffer now tried to overcome her emotions before going any further...
"And I had the best 2 years of my life with him, untill... One day
he led me back into heaven forest, and showed me his secret place. Where the wild roses grow, beautyfull and glimmering in the sun light just near the the river we used to visit all the time. There he planted a rose between my teeth and sat close to me, but his head turned the other way and i could almost spot a single tear dripping down his cheek... I never seen him cry before. "I was accepted... Im joining the crimson guards tonight and Im moving closer to the base...Im leaving school" He told me with his decisive, indisputable tone. Than he got up and walked away, a gun strapped to his back and he never came back. I felt empty, speachless and hollow inside... And all I had left was a rose, the loveliest rose in the garden, but nothing more but a single red rose..."
[shadow=pink,left,400]Jenifer's eyes began to water with soft regret, DB looked down on her with fake compassion and wiped her tears away, than he landed a soft kiss on her lips and stuck his claws through her heart, enjoying her gasp for air, her last breath stolen by the thief. The night painted red, old love faded into dust, never to return to life with the flames of its beautyfull red glory... the rose withered"[/shadow]
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