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Post by Darkjak87 on Dec 26, 2008 23:04:07 GMT -5
Lol, like it or be banned.
Pretty good, actually though.
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Paladin89
Marauder
[M:-5040]
All these changes! Wowzerz!
Posts: 779
RP Characters: Martin, Skye, Sicar, Malllock, Etrius and Ezekiel
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Post by Paladin89 on Dec 26, 2008 23:15:34 GMT -5
Well I probably wouldn't ban you unless you where just insulting but I do like criticism. Its one of the best ways to get better so if you have some criticism, even if its small, share it. I would like to surpass people expectations.
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kelinna
Hip Hog
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Woman with the healing touch.
Posts: 893
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Post by kelinna on Dec 27, 2008 0:42:18 GMT -5
The shading at the top is great but he is missing the bottom half of shading also he has no crotch/zipper for his pants. His expression is fierce and sword is bad-ass.
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Paladin89
Marauder
[M:-5040]
All these changes! Wowzerz!
Posts: 779
RP Characters: Martin, Skye, Sicar, Malllock, Etrius and Ezekiel
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Post by Paladin89 on Dec 27, 2008 0:46:18 GMT -5
Oddly enough I forgot to shade his bottom half. As for the crotch/zipper I've always forgotten to draw that. Thanks for telling me so I can add it in later.
As for his expression and sword, thank you. It took me forever just to get his eyes just right too show that expression. The eyes are so hard to work with. Just one little screw up can completely throw off a desired expression and feel.
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Post by Tatsu on Dec 27, 2008 0:54:41 GMT -5
AWESOME PIC DUDE! me likes it ^^
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Paladin89
Marauder
[M:-5040]
All these changes! Wowzerz!
Posts: 779
RP Characters: Martin, Skye, Sicar, Malllock, Etrius and Ezekiel
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Post by Paladin89 on Dec 27, 2008 0:56:59 GMT -5
Thank you.
If you see anything that seems off or could be improved tell me, criticism helps make artist better.
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kelinna
Hip Hog
[M:-3070]
Woman with the healing touch.
Posts: 893
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Post by kelinna on Dec 27, 2008 1:11:47 GMT -5
The eyes are so hard to work with. Just one little screw up can completely throw off a desired expression and feel.
Tell me about it, sometimes I'll be finished with a picture and just be left with the eyebrows and eyes. Argh many of pictures have met with my trash can because of the eyes >.< |
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Post by Tatsu on Dec 27, 2008 1:22:26 GMT -5
Eyes are the hardest thing to get right... I have trouble, I have that experience like u Kelinna...my trash can is full too XD
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Paladin89
Marauder
[M:-5040]
All these changes! Wowzerz!
Posts: 779
RP Characters: Martin, Skye, Sicar, Malllock, Etrius and Ezekiel
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Post by Paladin89 on Dec 31, 2008 0:34:07 GMT -5
And like I said in my other art board, Its that time of the day kids....what ever that is suppose to mean.
Today for your viewing pleasure I have a portrait (colored OOooo,AAAaaaaa)
Its rather bad coloring...I'm still learning since the most I've ever done with color was shade in my drawing. But here is a portrait of Etrius.
paladinsog.deviantart.com/art/Etrius-Portrait-107916917That and I suck at doing faces so this is an improvement in someways.
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