heart of a grey knight feedback

[darius1]

post what you think here freinds .

[dbkillerex]

I was certain you already opened a poem thread... eveyone has only one thread which they add posts with more poems to.

as for the poem, i found it pretty well written but not much commentery on it since well... I couldnt find a meaning. It is as though you are telling a story or lecturing about the duties of a knight even though poems are supposed to arouse some sort of emotion or atleast a response. There is nothing between the lines, but that could change in time ^^ ill keep reading.

[fox]

I actually liked the poem. I can see what DB is trying to say. I found it to be a story about the duties of a knight, though I thought it aroused the emotion of the feelings of the knight. I guess I felt the emotion of warmness and justice, y'know? I also found the poem kind of....spiritual, I suppose. How it was saying his soul and faith. I found it very beautiful.

[darius1]

thank you very much freinds this was just a rare flight of creativness for me

@ DBzors my intention was to induce feelings of duty, justice, warmth, and an all pervading wish to do what is right, and im going to ask Paladin or princedee to get rid of myn oher thread, it was a little embarrasing.

@foxzors awww thanks very much, that's the nicest thing anyone has said to me all week, and iti inspired by a group of very spiritual warriors.