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Post by dbkillerex on Sept 17, 2010 3:46:03 GMT -5
Id suggest you'd lower the brightness.. thats what i do
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Post by adeco on Sept 17, 2010 10:53:30 GMT -5
That's the scanner. Nothing I can control about that.
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Post by Altairas on Sept 17, 2010 15:41:31 GMT -5
I really think that you are doing good drawings especially if you haven't sat down and drawn for 8 years. On the profiles I have to say Starus has much better facial anatomy compared to the one of Rawling. But the chin bothers me a bit. I like the square manly chin but instead of the abrupt turn from the lower chin to the ear you could have it curve and fade out at the base of the ear. Also another tip I would like to throw out at you is that even though you eye is like really good ( the right placement for a side profile and has the right iris position) you might want to make it just a tad smaller and make it a sharper triangle shape. Example One last thing I will throw at ya is that instead of the straight eyebrows you should curve them along the top of the eye.
Hope you don't mind the critique :3 Can't wait to see more.
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Post by adeco on Sept 17, 2010 16:08:54 GMT -5
That's why I'm posting, for critique. Thanks for your input. And also, its time for you to feel special, I looked at one of your drawings as reference for the side profile pictures. So Thanks for that as well.
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Post by shadowred on Oct 19, 2010 23:41:27 GMT -5
I think the second drawing which is the side view one is really good. Especially if you havn't drawn in 8 years.
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