dbkillerex and Syia

[pinkeco]

Syia glanced at DB for a moment and said"I thought it would have been the right thing to do.."Syia looked up ahead to see the entrance of spargus appearing over the horizon.

[dbkillerex]

"The right thing to do... i haven't heard that for a long time. its hard to find people like that." He looked at the sky for a moment and then looking forward and saw spargus "were almost there. do you know anyone that lives there?"

[DVM-501]

*sigh*

• Work on grammar, this is incredibly difficult to read.
  
• What's with this this crystal providing power stuff? You can't actually obtain such an item.
  
• Why is there a Leaper in Haven? Leapers do not exist in Haven City.
  
• Why did Syia use red eco to stop the Leaper? normal power is enough stops them, using red eco would snap the Leaper's neck.
  
• How'd they get out of Haven and into the Waistland threw a gate? The only way to the Waistland is either by transport or through the Catacombs.
  
• The Stinger is only a knife, you can't cut a Metalhead's head off with it.
  
• The Rapier can't cut a Metalhead's head in half. The thin flimsy metal is meant for stabbing and would break if made contact with the incredibly hard head of a Metalhead.
  
• Electrocutes a Metalhead? Electrocutes the Metalhead with what? You have no weapon or power that is capable of doing such a thing.
  
• You can't kill a Metalhead with one punch, even Jak can't do that and we're a little more realistic here. It takes a lot more then that to kill a Metalhead.
  

[dbkillerex]

-not longer inl... (This in is no longer has anything to do with this topic, and i dont like it but i cant erase it, so a edited it, yay XD

I BAME THIS POST FOR NOT BEING EPIC

[DVM-501]

You and Pink talking about the RP has nothing to do with what I listed as being problems. And it doesn't matter if the Leaper is a friend's or not, Leapers are not in Haven so it doesn't belong there. Leapers are in the Waistland and Spargous.