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Post by dbkillerex on Sept 11, 2010 4:15:35 GMT -5
*Whispers* Choose me >>! *Whispers* The water glompemon is the bestZ0RZ!...  |
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Post by Tatsu on Sept 11, 2010 13:04:19 GMT -5
-shoots flames at db.- I dont think so. She gonna choose me cuz Flames are better. XP
-hair is on fire- Tatty rules XP
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Post by Altairas on Jan 2, 2011 16:52:20 GMT -5
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darius1
Metal Kor
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the best way to die is for duty and honor
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Post by darius1 on Jan 5, 2011 17:34:49 GMT -5
comes up to evey and mumbles ''pleas o great artist could you draw Targa (back's away then run's really fast)
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Paladin89
Marauder
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All these changes! Wowzerz!
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RP Characters: Martin, Skye, Sicar, Malllock, Etrius and Ezekiel
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Post by Paladin89 on Jan 6, 2011 0:06:17 GMT -5
Lol derp! Very good art evey. I like the style that you use. Your proportions are good and your coloring I must say surpasses anything I could do. I'm horrible with color. Something I would like to see though is more contrast in your your line work. You have very light lines which I know a lot of that comes from the scanning. Still take a darker pencil such as a 4B or higher if you have it (and know what I'm talking about) and go over slowly on the out lines. Make one single line to pull away from the scratchiness. Also another thing I noticed. You are starting to work I could see on values in your drawings. This is good. Never be afraid to get really dark in some areas. This really dark to lighter helps things pop. Something also that can help is that if you have a character that is fairly light darken in the background around it. This will help pop that character out some. Just little opinions that I have. Don't take anything I say as bad, just as ideas to help improve. When I post art I very much pray that people do the same, else how do we get better  . Great work now make it BETTER! HAZA!! |
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Post by Altairas on Jan 6, 2011 6:41:05 GMT -5
Thank you Paladin for the Critique! I love critiques! I'm glad you like the coloring actually, since I have only been using the tablet/paint tool sai for only a few pictures. And with the lines and darkness most of that may be because a have to take pictures of my art. ( and that I lack actual shading pencils) But, anyway, thank you ! I will defiantly start trying to improve :3
@darius I might try if I have some time on the comp ( PM me the description of Targa so I can get a bit of an idea of what I'm drawing : D )
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fox
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omg these two are sooo cute
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Post by fox on Jan 6, 2011 19:10:35 GMT -5
I basically squeed when I saw the chibbis!!!!!! They are so adorable! Plus, the dragon pictures are beautiful! The one I really like is the one with the girl and the dragon. That one is probably my favorite. XD I would give you critique, but I feel bad if I do because I am not an artist in anyway shape or form. So I'll just let artists help you there. ;p
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Paladin89
Marauder
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All these changes! Wowzerz!
Posts: 779
RP Characters: Martin, Skye, Sicar, Malllock, Etrius and Ezekiel
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Post by Paladin89 on Jan 6, 2011 21:34:06 GMT -5
Actually Fox, your critique is some of the best we can get. It let's us artists know how people who are not artist see things. This helps us in different ways from artist who may look at just values or placement on the page. You look at things in a more over all way. Trust me, critique from you is just as good, of not better than what you may get from another artist who knows what to look for.
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darius1
Metal Kor
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the best way to die is for duty and honor
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Post by darius1 on Jan 7, 2011 12:03:58 GMT -5
Cool thank you.
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Post by Altairas on Feb 4, 2011 15:12:26 GMT -5
Scroll image for my signature Dragon Cave forums.  Dragon avatar for Dragon Cave forums.  My first animated avatar : D Made it free for deviant art avis.  My deviant art avatar : D  Another free avatar for Deviant art.  |
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