Targa [M]

[darius1]

Era:Barons corruption onwards

Name:Targa

Sex:Male

Age:Ten or so years

Appearance:Targa is 2 meters tall when walking on his hind legs and a 50CM wide he is also covered in purple scales. his large yellow eyes are situated below his glowing Yellow jem witch is set in his crested forehead. he has a set of punch claws projecting from his fore arms and large teeth. he has large amounts of metal plating on his stomach and back but also has some human features such as aposable thumbs and human hair in some places

Posture:upright and lumbering

Personality:Targa is quick to anger but loves seeing other metalheads and learning things about humans he also spends much of his time with hatchlings. he never gives up and would rather die than be dishonourd

Occupation:None

Abilities/Skills:Targa is skilled in hand to hand combat but uses ranged weapons just as well

Powers:Intermediate dark ECO
Intermediate yellow Eco
Basic blue Eco

Weapons:Dark ECO blaster on his right arm and teeth claws and punch claws

Relationships:he has relation ships with many other metalheads mostly in the sewers.

Story about them/History:Targa has fought many humans but once he had only lightly injured a human female but he saw something in her eyes something that touched his heart it was fear pure fear and he had never seen it in a human before all the others wore masks or glasses this was when he learned mercy and stopped short of spearing her with his punch claw she promptly fainted so he picked her up and during the night placed her at the gates of haven since then he has been compassionate to some humans. this is because he is a human hybrid and still has some links to his human half even though he has lived in the wild all his life.he has found ways into haven and hunts members of the organization.
he constantly searches for human dark Eco users to fight feeling that humans are not worthy of the dark Eco but would never want humans completely destroyed so he apposes any attack plans on Haven and would and has fought at the side of humans in the past he also hunts for the female he spared many years ago to thank her for teaching him so much (Emotions and Such).

soundtrack: www.youtube.com/watch?v=uuU2udKRlU0&feature=related just the song not the vid.

[Paladin89]

YES! Another metal head character to join the ranks.
Now for critiquing, very interesting character but I have a few things to ask and say.

First off is this character a straight up metal head or a metal head/human hybrid.
Reason for me asking this is that we here at DE have been treating the hybrids as a little more intelligent then the normal run of the mill metal head. It doesn't really matter but it is something to keep in mind to possibly use in your characters appearance and story/history.
Also I advise you to elaborate more on his appearance and history. Using the question I ask about him being a hybrid can assist with this. If he is just a really intelligent metal head than go through and explain it. Go through his creation some, show how he became more intelligent then the rest. Remember most metal heads are very primal in nature, or at least they are here, so you need to show how your character is different. Its very hard to explain mercy without explaining some kind of intelligence behind that mercy.
Also bring out the appearance some more, does he have a tail, does he have metal plating here or there, etc.
My advise is if you have trouble with appearance is to do a rough doodle of your character and then describe it.
These are just some simple thing to be done and a really good character build can really help in the long run with the decision that your character will make down the road.

And also, Welcome do Dystopiatic Eco I hope you enjoy you time here with us and if you have any questions feel free to ask me or the rest of the staff. Now get going! Those rps don't play themselves!

[darius1]

He is a Hybrid and i have edited the post to show this i am also planning on making a special operations Krimzon guard

[Paladin89]

Hmm, he is still lacking a little.
Tell ya what, here are some metal heads and metal head hybrid characters that are on the site. This should give you some great inspiration and trust me we need more hora'quan, gotta kill the dang humans!
Khaloron
Vashti
Mallock
Sicar
These are just for some inspiration and by no means does your character have to be any where like these character.

If you can add some more into the history, it really helps flesh out your character and make him more believable.

And very cool with the Krimson Guard, its always good to even out between different races.

[darius1]

Thanks for the advice but it think may all be for nothing because i am a Brit so i cant really roleplay

[Paladin89]

Dude where you come from doesn't matter. I come from the swamps North America. We kinda' talk a little funny out here so you can't pull that not bein' able to roleplay on me.
Besides it takes a little practice and you'll get good. No stress we have people here that have are really good at role play and then we have new people that come who are workin' there way up.

I like what you have added to the character. It helps give a little more life to him. So with out any further waiting I approve this character. Feel free to come back and update him as you think of more history and back story to add to him.

NOW, get out there in the rp's and start playing, and remember to abide by the rules and regulation of the site!

[Tatsu]

Dude nice character! He would be awesome to face off me Nephra lol. (She is a Dark Eco User). At any rate, I like the appearance a lot, very descriptive. Excellent all in all!


Dude, like what paladin said, where you come from doesn’t matter. Before I joined Dysto I was a horrible role-player, even my friends had said no to me! This place will help you out a lot, for instance my Zombie brother helped me out, DB. Or if you like we can rp together and I can give you tips^^.

Another good source is the staff. Kelinna is awesome, she helps! Paladin, DVM, or if ya want you can try asking Princedee. Just know like all the members on here are willing to give you tips or help you out, also we are one really (supremely) big family! Just get out there and role-play! Who cares what others think ^^. All in all be yourself and just role-play if ya like ^^.

By the way I am Tatsu, I am very hyper like all the time, ask the Dysto Family ^^.

[princedee]

Jun 25, 2010 15:19:46 GMT -5 Tatsu said:

I was a horrible role-player

No, you weren't. You should see my rp player. Total embarrassment lol.

[Tatsu]

Dude I was a horrible one, I never did give emotions or locations and that. Now I do and much more.

You know, I have never seen you role-play. And I am sure you role-play awesomely! Do you have a character cuz we should role-play dude!

[princedee]

I wasn't much of a role-player, but I decided to give it a try and it didn't turn out well so I gave up on my character. While I was moderating the role-plays, I realized it wasn't my thing, and I was going to get tired of role-playing later on.

The good part about moderating role-plays is how I get to read all the interesting stories.