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sterre Newbe Posts: 4	[d] Mar 25, 2011 1:44:40 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sterre on Mar 25, 2011 1:44:40 GMT -5 .
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neferti
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Post by neferti on Apr 1, 2011 7:24:11 GMT -5

Your might wanna put the description of Geal's face into the personality; put something about his expression on his face into the personality description which I did not see, meaning explain at what moments he gets that expression. You also need to change your Eco to Beginner, since you have yet to buy the upgrades. All you need after that is the History, explaining his relationships, occupation, etc.

Last Edit: Apr 6, 2011 11:06:42 GMT -5 by neferti

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Altairas Underground Runner Waiting for the word. Posts: 675 RP Characters: Audra Negron, Leonardo Charter, Evey Saunders, Mickaron Saunders, PCW-37S "Nuts", Boltz,	[d] Apr 10, 2011 20:17:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Altairas on Apr 10, 2011 20:17:24 GMT -5 Wow loving this character, very well written and thought out. I can't wait till you get up the history.

Paladin89 Marauder [M:-5040] All these changes! Wowzerz! Posts: 779 RP Characters: Martin, Skye, Sicar, Malllock, Etrius and Ezekiel	[d] Apr 12, 2011 11:41:14 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Paladin89 on Apr 12, 2011 11:41:14 GMT -5 Looks really good, just need a history and you should be good to go!
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sterre Newbe Posts: 4	[d] Apr 13, 2011 20:45:14 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sterre on Apr 13, 2011 20:45:14 GMT -5 Thanks, guys. I should be finished by this weekend. School and this terrible virus going around the city have been keeping me busy!

Paladin89 Marauder [M:-5040] All these changes! Wowzerz! Posts: 779 RP Characters: Martin, Skye, Sicar, Malllock, Etrius and Ezekiel	[d] Apr 13, 2011 21:16:22 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Paladin89 on Apr 13, 2011 21:16:22 GMT -5 Its okay, you'll find that school gets in the way of many of us here.
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Post by sterre on Mar 25, 2011 1:44:40 GMT -5

Post by neferti on Apr 1, 2011 7:24:11 GMT -5

Post by Altairas on Apr 10, 2011 20:17:24 GMT -5

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Post by sterre on Apr 13, 2011 20:45:14 GMT -5

Post by Paladin89 on Apr 13, 2011 21:16:22 GMT -5

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