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trixie Dystopia Posts: 21	Shane Masters [H] Oct 11, 2010 9:29:33 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by trixie on Oct 11, 2010 9:29:33 GMT -5 I know I've been working on my writing like crazy lately so I can make it perfect
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Shane Masters [H] Oct 11, 2010 17:15:33 GMT -5

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Post by kelinna on Oct 11, 2010 17:15:33 GMT -5

The background seems a little lacking... Perhaps going into more detail on how they joined the ranks of the KG as he grew older. Another thing you could add how he meet each of his friends; also if he is a KG in training how did he get handed a job like taking out a assassin?

Curious minds would like to know.

raven Metal Kor [M:-100] My heart can't break when it wasn't even whole to start with Posts: 107	Shane Masters [H] Oct 11, 2010 17:50:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by raven on Oct 11, 2010 17:50:20 GMT -5 These are pretty good things to add, he needs more explanation, I'll help if you want or need any ideas
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trixie Dystopia Posts: 21	Shane Masters [H] Oct 14, 2010 18:26:35 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by trixie on Oct 14, 2010 18:26:35 GMT -5 Ok its been updated i hope this is better
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trixie Dystopia Posts: 21	Shane Masters [H] Oct 17, 2010 19:12:33 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by trixie on Oct 17, 2010 19:12:33 GMT -5 Anyone have anymore advice for him, is everything good yet??
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neferti Outcast [M:-200] Posts: 129	Shane Masters [H] Oct 17, 2010 19:23:58 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by neferti on Oct 17, 2010 19:23:58 GMT -5 I say give the description to that gun I've been waiting to hear about.
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trixie Dystopia Posts: 21	Shane Masters [H] Oct 17, 2010 19:28:09 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by trixie on Oct 17, 2010 19:28:09 GMT -5 okey doke
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Post by trixie on Oct 11, 2010 9:29:33 GMT -5

Post by kelinna on Oct 11, 2010 17:15:33 GMT -5

Post by raven on Oct 11, 2010 17:50:20 GMT -5

Post by trixie on Oct 14, 2010 18:26:35 GMT -5

Post by trixie on Oct 17, 2010 19:12:33 GMT -5

Post by neferti on Oct 17, 2010 19:23:58 GMT -5

Post by trixie on Oct 17, 2010 19:28:09 GMT -5

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