darius1
Metal Kor
[M:-530]
the best way to die is for duty and honor
Posts: 117
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Post by darius1 on Jan 19, 2011 15:39:13 GMT -5
i love your suggestions and darkjak i decided on the carbine rather than a shotgun. i will edit his persona as well evey.
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Post by Altairas on Jan 26, 2011 17:28:54 GMT -5
[url=http://www.bt-ag.ch/en/manufacturing/firearms/tp9_carbine.php?navid=17t[ Main Weapon[/url] ^ this replace the ( [ ) before main with a ( ] ) and you can delete the second from before Weapons. But other then that, I really like this guy! Great job fixing him up, I'm glad you listened to some of my suggestions :B
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darius1
Metal Kor
[M:-530]
the best way to die is for duty and honor
Posts: 117
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Post by darius1 on Jan 27, 2011 5:49:53 GMT -5
thank you Evey for all of your suggestion's
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Post by Altairas on Jan 27, 2011 6:31:13 GMT -5
Your welcome :B Glad to be able to help !
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Paladin89
Marauder
[M:-5040]
All these changes! Wowzerz!
Posts: 779
RP Characters: Martin, Skye, Sicar, Malllock, Etrius and Ezekiel
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Post by Paladin89 on Feb 2, 2011 11:59:51 GMT -5
Okay, so I've been looking over the character some more and everything looks good except one thing. That would be the wires that run under your characters' skin that have the red eco in them. This, from what I've been told, will not work. It could lead to a good bit of power playing. Your character with the mechanical arm will already be strong as it is. To add in even more wiring to increase his strength would become ridiculous. The mechanical eye and arm are fine but at the moment, the wires, not so much. Once those have been either removed or changed in a suitable way then this character will be good to go.
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Paladin89
Marauder
[M:-5040]
All these changes! Wowzerz!
Posts: 779
RP Characters: Martin, Skye, Sicar, Malllock, Etrius and Ezekiel
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Post by Paladin89 on Feb 3, 2011 12:14:29 GMT -5
Alright everything looks pretty good. Now you dont have to do this right away but it's mentioned that your characters mechanical arm is made of precursor metal. This may be a good back story to rp, such as how he came to obtain such material. One last thing, I'm not sure how much you know about infrared or night vision but bright flashes of light are pretty much blinding. So if your character has an incident that involves bright light it will be very painful and disorienting. Just something to keep in mind when rping this character. And with that, this character is approved, enjoy.
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darius1
Metal Kor
[M:-530]
the best way to die is for duty and honor
Posts: 117
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Post by darius1 on Feb 3, 2011 14:45:16 GMT -5
Thank you pally
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